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Echo.

Hear the echo.
Past the Silence,
Into the waves.

It is an experience.
A Journey through time,
With Memories to unravel.

It is so fragile.
Yet so strong,
So Powerful.

The Magic.
Through it all,
It Saves us.

I used four key words in this poem: echo experience, fragile, and Magic. please tell me what you think! I wrote this in ten minutes, so it might not be the best.

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