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Just Leave

The beautiful soul doesn't know...
Seduction,
Meaningless Darkness,
Envy.
Dear Innocence, Pick Up Your Things and Leave
It Was Only A Black Art
Cupid's Wound Upon My Heart

A contest entry

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  • J. M. Spenser
    September 3

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    Wow this was wonderful. I loved it so much that... well... it really is an unspoken thing that I think. And i'm sure you wouldn't want your creation to be with a thing such as myself. But all things are random and so who knows of what may come out. Specially my expectations of this contest. Which I thank you oh so much in entering. I'm sure after reading this comment that you are wary in entering. lol But fear thee not as to there may... more acurately there will definatly be a second contest. A second round persay. And now in wondering as to why I am speaking now of so minial a thing and seeming not to be stopping I am asking the same exact question. So I bid farewell and hope to see you in the next round of my madness.


    • trinajean
      September 3
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      Thanks so much for the praise, I am glad you enjoyed it! I am glad to me moving on!