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Song of Stillness

Be still, my love, to feel the silent call,
When angels sing between each beat of heart,
Their gratitude for grace, however small,
That conjures from existence living art.
Be silent, sweetheart, listen to love's song;
Harmonious, cherubic wisdom's ode,
Which casts aside pride's burdens carried long
To wash us in divinity bestowed.
Within depths of organic quietude,
Beyond the realm of worry and distrust,
Exists in thoughtlessness a sacred mood
Such melodies of spirit grant to us.
Love's stillness temp'ring any heart that knows,
This weeping, as pure pleasance, overflows.










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  • Emmyb gold member
    October 8

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    This is very intricately crafted and enjoyable to read.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 27
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    The Perfect Poem...

    Your 'Song of Stillness' now has my muse stirring.

  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 27
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    Stunning!!

    Have I not seen this beautiful poem before? How did I miss it? I need to visit your pages more often, as I really love your muse's awesome masterwork!! Thank you for sharing, you've given me much food for thought... I'm wishing you all the best!!
    Peace,
    Cyn


  • myrataal silver member
    August 31

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    Beautiful!

    Your poetry is much softer, subtle and truly touches on that which brings serenity: sweet silence.

    Well done, Allan.
    Love
    Always Myra


  • Amera gold member
    August 31

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    One of the best love poems you have ever written...
    sigh.....

    Love,
    Amera


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    August 30

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    If I could give you a hundred clappies
    or more to fill this box up,for such a
    beautiful penning I would, this is so
    heart filled

    Lovely

    Rend

  • really good poem, i enjoyed the read, take care


  • Mikaza
    August 30

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    Excellent! Very beautiful and mind-pondering! Good job!

  • Sara87
    August 30
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    wow what a lovely poem


  • Hope Angel silver member
    August 30

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    This is so beautiful. Whoever this is for is very lucky.
    "When angels sing between each beat of heart," I love that line.
    Good luck in the contest Hope you have a nice day I enjoyed reading

    Jade

  • Oh wow Allan, this is beautiful... Your lady is very lucky...


  • DesolatELifE
    August 28

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    I'd repeat what the comment below says, but it's not my contest, so that would sound silly. Heh. Beautiful and all that, though, is a good description.


  • prankstar
    August 27

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    very beautiful I like it. thank you for entering this in my contest. best of luck.

  • siahaan
    August 27
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    pretty...


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 27

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    Very good Allan, as always
    you amaze me. this one touched me
    why I dont know

    thanks for sharing and best of luck to you
    Passions

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