Be still, my love, to feel the silent call,
When angels sing between each beat of heart,
Their gratitude for grace, however small,
That conjures from existence living art.
Be silent, sweetheart, listen to love's song;
Harmonious, cherubic wisdom's ode,
Which casts aside pride's burdens carried long
To wash us in divinity bestowed.
Within depths of organic quietude,
Beyond the realm of worry and distrust,
Exists in thoughtlessness a sacred mood
Such melodies of spirit grant to us.
Love's stillness temp'ring any heart that knows,
This weeping, as pure pleasance, overflows.
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This is very intricately crafted and enjoyable to read.


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The Perfect Poem...
Your 'Song of Stillness' now has my muse stirring.


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YAAY! I hope my muse was a gentleman about it.
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The Perfect Gentleman's Muse
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Stunning!!
Have I not seen this beautiful poem before? How did I miss it? I need to visit your pages more often, as I really love your muse's awesome masterwork!! Thank you for sharing, you've given me much food for thought... I'm wishing you all the best!!
Peace,
Cyn

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Beautiful!
Your poetry is much softer, subtle and truly touches on that which brings serenity: sweet silence.
Well done, Allan.
Love
Always Myra

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One of the best love poems you have ever written...
sigh.....
Love,
Amera

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If I could give you a hundred clappies
or more to fill this box up,for such a
beautiful penning I would, this is so
heart filled
Lovely
Rend


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really good poem, i enjoyed the read, take care
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Excellent! Very beautiful and mind-pondering! Good job!
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wow what a lovely poem
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This is so beautiful. Whoever this is for is very lucky.
"When angels sing between each beat of heart," I love that line.
Good luck in the contest
Hope you have a nice day I enjoyed reading
♥
Jade

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Oh wow Allan, this is beautiful... Your lady is very lucky...


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I'd repeat what the comment below says, but it's not my contest, so that would sound silly. Heh. Beautiful and all that, though, is a good description.


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very beautiful I like it. thank you for entering this in my contest. best of luck.
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pretty...
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Very good Allan, as always
you amaze me. this one touched me
why I dont know
thanks for sharing and best of luck to you
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