I don't want to be dependent
on you & your lies
but that's all I can count on
Your excuses fade together
leaving me exhausted
& feeling dejected
I pledge to myself over & over
not to believe you
but you say you can relate to me
I'm afraid of being scorned
if my progress in getting over you
is too nimble.
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Word bank prompt:
dependent, exhaust, dejected, relate, want, scorn, progress, nimble, pledge, fade
I believe I used some form of each word. If I used any of them wrong let me know please.
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excellent
well done..
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Excellent
A wonderful write. So very creative. Great use of word bank. Best of luck in the contest
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Great job =)
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Another great go of a word bank and I can relate to this in my own weird way, enjoyable read! X DD
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Another great job. Thanks so much for sharing.
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wow another excellent write from the word bank. You really do know how to write some excellent writes. You really paint pictures with your words. And add emotion to it too. Great job as usual. I love to read your writings.
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Very well done, my best wishes.
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Another good one with the word bank. Showing the way you feel about the person. Knowing that they are bad for you yet you still want them.
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