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Vacation Thoughts

the dolphins are surfing
in the break of the waves
as the kites skitter high in the sky

the birds are trying to
make away with the crumbs
before they hastily spread wings to fly...

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    August 29

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    What a lovely little thought, makes me long for a beach. About the only vacation I get is if my mom decides she wants my kids for the night, so woo woo, a movie & dinner, haha, I'd love to be able to go away. Nicely done!

    ♥
    whisper


  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 27

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    Sounds like you had fun