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On My Own

The wind whispers around me,
unseen but yet I feel it,
surrounding me with its’ presence,
but yet I still feel alone.
I thought that it would be better
with my back turned to the truth,
but I guess that I was wrong
for I feel lost while on my own.
And though I try to find my way
through the mixed feelings that I have,
I can’t get over the fact that
I am scared of the unknown.
Since the confusion is frustrating,
the loneliness, it is gripping,
and the seed I thought was planted
I guess was never deeply sown.
I know no one can help me
and that it’s my own battle to fight,
and though I’m surrounded in His presence,
I’m still lost and all alone.

Author notes

I wrote this about how I feel at the moment in terms of where I stand with my relationship with God. I wrote a poem the other day that is below this one that talks about how I feel so many people are fake and whatnot where I am and that it just turns me off from what I should be doing and who I should be. I guess I'm left questioning everything and if all of this is really what I want in a sense. Sometimes I think it would be so much easier and happier if I just went back to before. I don't know though. I guess I still have some things to think about and figure out.

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  • xxDemonicxx
    September 27

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    i really loved it
    alot of emotions and feelings in it
    i loved how it flows