Drowning in highways and carbon-copy corporation,
commercialized widow's web,
xeroxed consumers
work their assembly line development
A contest entry
- 17 words by HopelessScribbles.
800 points, ended September 12, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is similar to another piece with the same theme, that of a corporation world lost in businesses and politics. It's a very joyless subject, but you do well with capturing it.
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so true, well said by buried treasures below mine, thank you for joining in good luck
Linda
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Supposedly, free-thinking and independent human beings acting very much like pre-programed robotics enduring their mundane, pointless existances until death overtakes them or they are hauled back to the factory for a diagnostic tune-up & oil change!
Very Well expressed and best of luck in the contest!
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exactly. when did people stop thinking for themselves and living life? or did they ever?
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Yes our world is so industrialized so much pollution created each new day. It is so scary to think what we mankind are doing to our Mother Earth. Very thought provoking write, good luck in the contest, hugs Theresa
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thanks so much. it is crazy. and so pointless too. so many people just go to work, come home, pay bills, repeat.
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Nice going stick to those corporate junkies lol
I hate them more than green peace
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lol. thanks!
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