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Never What You Think

You read me like a book, so easily
You never understand, so rarely

You annoy me constantly, mockingly
You make fun of me, teasingly

You apologize too much, everyday
You barely apologize, rarely

You and me are so close, inseperable
You and me are so different, far apart

You hold me tighly, lovingly
You hold me gently, tenderly

You caress my skin, slowly
You caress my hair, sweetly

You kiss me lightly, barely there sometimes
You kiss me deeply, passionately

When you make love, it is perfect
When you make love, I am simply dreaming

You think of no one but me, forever
You always think of someone else, never

You will always be there, no matter what
You will never come running to save me, no matter what

When you say 'I love you', everything just falls into place
When you say 'I love you', it reminds me of how easily you could slip away...

Author notes

Like the title says, it's not what you think it is...
This write has so much meaning behind it, for me that is...
I had to write this out. Or my brain would have exploded...

Celtic, my love, if you work this out, I'm so sorry...

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  • Je suis chaud
    November 10

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    NIce :)

    I love this poem nice flow, nice structure no areas sound awkward it sounds just right

    btw thanks for the peom comment


    • Captain Jenny
      November 10
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      Thank you so much...
      This write means quiet a lot to me and its nice to see someone likeing it ^_^


  • Mr.
    August 27
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    Love is so confusing sometimes. Nice poem. :]