Unbiased eyes
Focus while I
Tell of my difficulties
Listening attentively
Never questioning reason
Through angry tears
An accidental glance
Love penetrates my soul
For the moment all is well
Author notes
Prompt: Tranquilized
30 words
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie! Everyone gets points by Blue-Rose Beauty.
540 points, ended August 28, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Can you please enter one that wasn't on the list?
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I knew that lol
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That round will come.
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I kept expecting it to turn out that the listener was sedated but you made it romantic. Nice job!
I like the first stanza the best -
Wonderful take on the prompt, I really enjoyed it,
Best of luck to you
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