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Insomnia

Why can I not sleep, this silence breeds doubts
these walls surround me, smothering me as I lay awake
I cant break free from this, confined to a wooden box
decay fills the air, I breathe but choke on each breath
I call out for help, but they do not respond
Why cant they hear me? Why dont they help me?
Alone I lay, If sleep would come I would be happy
At peace I would dream, forever dreams of childhood past
"Are you awake?" A voice, in the darkness
But not my own, who could this stranger be?
I look around me, unable to percieve a thing in this gloom
But now a light, it draws near my face and I see
a kiss-like smile that leaves you beguiled
as death pulls me down, into her sweet embrace.

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  • i love it ^_^ and it doesnt rhyme!!! -applause- well done!!
    can you maybe make it a little longer pleasey?

    thanky.


    • Pondering-panda
      August 28
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      thankye ^_^ I dont always rhyme sometimes I force myself not to he he. I dont know how to make it longer I will try think of a way