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Rain on me

Rain on me,
with an urgent type of fantasy.
You look deep into me,
I want to know..
exactly what its going to be.
the cool drops,
coast down my body,
but they don't cool me.
My temperature is going through the roof,
as I look at you,
licking your lips,
thinking your slick...
My only hope is that you won't be too quick,
with that magic stick.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 2

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    Thank you for your sensual entry, good luck, Josie

  • mcfreeman
    September 1
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    wet...

    thoughts dripping like an ice cube melting...


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    August 27

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    this is awesome hun
    and the coolness spent
    upon the need tempt
    is something to be felt
    well done Hugs Angel♥


  • Sara Khan
    August 27
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    My temerature is going through the roof..
    Woe