Where can I begin about my erotic fantasies
Well I could start with what I will do
Which would be everything and anything
I would want to take her in every position possible
By starting down stairs with a trip to the Helmand province of her forest
Yes like a gateau I would serve her well indeed
I would savour each last drop of juice
Only to supple on her most prized assets
In the garden yes! With those gnomes watching
Oh my god yes by the apple trees, where the garden of pleasure began
I would make the fruits of her, bare indecency indeed
She would blossom like a mirror seeing erotica for the first time
only to be served good
She would know why eve was born
Yes to be suckled and touch like you don’t know what
Adam would see fit to preserve her womanly charms
By idolising her most treasures body parts in equal measure
I would make her submit only to let her take control
Then to only force my wicked ways with her, until she could breathe no more
I would idolise her key points and go down deep inside for the kill
She would love me more than the karma sutra
I would love it more being in control
Well indeed it is a mans world
And what are men for but to please not tease
if not to dominate women, who love vicious lovemaking
She would ache with every groan of her being
She would moan to my tune, that I play like a sweet organ orchestra
I would be the classical music in heart
I would be the beginning of her
And she would be that end of me
I would ravish her far worse than the marquis de Sade
God would hate me and he would abandon me, for idolising her true from
But what would be her worth, if I could not unload and ravish her waking soul
She would be a women indeed
She would be the plague in my heart, that love that would not dare speak her name
But that love that would do her like she knew I could
God damn I would go hard on her with all my powers
I would do more for her than the person who brought her into this world
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- Love On The Outside by sensualbutterfly.
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Amazing!
i enjoyed this very much
good luck in my contest x -
That's awesome man? Can you tell me on what planet I can find such womanly pleasures? For here I fail to see where they hide, if only...oh dream on! Well it is a man's world, or it once was. Now I would say it is as much a woman's world as it is a man's world. Take care my AP friend and thanks for sharing this poem.
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Very awesome imagery..The whole thing sends shivers down my spine.. but not all women agree that this is a man's world. Just depends on the female and male what they truely like. Very well written hun. !Keep it up umm I mean keep writing.
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Wow I am speechless after reading this, such vivid imagery and emotions. Wow, good luck in the contest!
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Ummm....what can I say....Well indeed it is a mans world
And what are men for but to please not tease
if not to dominate women, who love vicious lovemaking...wow...I am left as speechless as your lady would be at the end of this! Great job and thank you so much for the entry.
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Your'e welcome. I aim to please not tease
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