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Hope Must Remain

Desperate need

Injustice reigns

Greed blinded eyes

Power lust in dominance

Compassionate healing hands

Hope still remains

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To express anything in just 17 words is a challenge, but your view of the world, more so.

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  • poetryality silver member
    September 23

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    Yes! Hope reigns. Without it there is little or nothing. Your poem is powerful and speaks volumes in these desperate time.s Excellent!


    Much Respect ♥

    Renee



  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 11

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    very well put, life is a trial in some ways we must go with the flow..thank you for this entry
    good luck
    Linda


  • Olivias Violin
    September 9

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    "Hope is like a road in the country; there was never a road, but when many people walk on it, the road comes into existence." - Lin Yutang


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 4

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    Indeed, to have expressed such a sense of hope with only 17 words is a remarkable thing, Poet. Well done. Good luck in the contest.


  • poetryality silver member
    August 27
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    YES! The last line says it all. No matter how difficult it all seems there is always hope. I believe we shall endure the worst and come out squeeky clean. Just my optimism speaking here and it seems, yours too. Very truthful and succint! I wish you well in the challenge.


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee

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