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Travels

A compass and backpack,
And matches and tent,
Food for a quick snack,
Sometimes a vehicle to rent.

These are the items,
A traveller would bring,
When going on a journey,
You don't want to miss a thing.

You have to know your way,
You have to read a map,
You have to know your countries,
In just a quick snap.

Catch a train or a bus,
Cook a meal on a fire,
Climb a tall mountain,
Feel yourself going higher.

Know the wildlife around you,
Wake up to a birds call,
Watch deer skip through the forest,
Help animals big and small.

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I wrote this for my Cousin Conor because he had travelled all over England.

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  • lovlilmystery
    August 28

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    awwww

    This poem is sweet. I like the way it flows. It is a really good read. Was I able to help you, with some inspirations? Take a look at my new poems, maybe the way I write, just might give you some ideas. And if they do, then I will be happy, for you. Take care.

    Sandi


  • tawk gold member
    August 27

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    I have always wanted to go to England but I am so scared of airplanes so I guess I will never visit lol. What a wonderful poem the flow and rhythm were wonderful! I love to go up in the mountains where my husbands mother lives it is so beautiful and peaceful. Thanks for sharing your amazing poem I so enjoyed reading. Have a great night, hugs Theresa

  • abu nuwas
    August 27
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    V nice

    Some of the grown-ups here could learn from this!