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Lastly



Firstly

I want a ring
A shining golden band
Laced with shining inset diamonds
In a shining velvet box
That you stashed in your pocket
For months in fear


Mostly

I want a great big house
With great big doors
And many great big windows
To waste away by
Through the snow
Through the rain
Through the time


Lastly

In the deepest parts of me
Past the fear
Past regret
Past shining rocks and plywood
I just want to be
To stay
In love




Author notes

I just felt like not writing for 2 months then flooding the website with new stuff...

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    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Its-Deja-Vu
    September 1
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    awww!! its like swollen... like its so full of awsum that this poem is swollen with lovely love stuff


  • xbonniemichellex
    August 31
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    I love it!!! great job!