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You Are My [Only One]

You've broken me
This fragile thing
Split into pieces
All this affliction

Why can't you see
That I'm hurting
It never ceases
Like an addiction

Where did your heart go?
All the Love that we shared
This is not like you
I can not accept

Hey there, Hello?
Its like you don't care
If only you knew
All the tears that I've wept

You act like it's a game
And now I'm through playing
This is not what I want
I'm afraid to fall so hard

I'm going insane
My mind is decaying
All you do is taunt
I've got up my gaurd

But what if I fell
What would you do
How would you feel
Would this all change

Or shall I stay in hell
Or maybe you will know
Just how I'll deal
This is all so strange

You've broken me
This fragile thing
Split into pieces
All this affliction

I Love You

Author notes

I was hoping I wouldn't come back to this. The place where all I want to do is curl up in a ball and hide from the world. Sit by myself and just soak up more depression.
It hurts so bad, when the one person that you thought would always Love you tells you that he doesn't anymore.
You'd think after 4 years there would be more than this.
=((

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  • Divina love
    September 23

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    This was so sad, i cannot imagine how it feels when the one you love one day does not love you back.

    Love D.L.


  • Luckybuddy
    September 20

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    hmmm goood

    Well its abvious from your poem that u were really destroyed at that time. But the main piont is that if some body don`t cares for our love then we should not feel rependence on such people.


    So stay happy

    Lucky


  • ShawnG
    September 1

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    I love deppresion and clearly deppresion loves you... I can fully relate to this and find this poem beautiful in it's own little way... though some of your word choicing i care not for this is still a good raw write. If you love deppresion visit my favorite AP poet, Rue... he is truly gifted


  • Xxcant runxX
    August 27
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    Wowvspeachless great job