deep into the shadows beyond the noise and confusion, lifted upon cloudless guilt- it remains- the same
here a perfect structure blocks the way of a murky destination, encompassing mind and body... -a deep unconscious lingering- and thoughts become... one
darkened nights under sprinkled reflections reveal a harvested souls' long forgotten fate- silently shifting amongst the melodious cries of a sunken tide.
Author notes
not sure if I'm finished
A contest entry
- Shatter Your Chains (Freewriting/ProsePoetry) by intoothandclaw.
700 points, ended September 10, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nvm its already closed.... you got lucky
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i like this alot, kinda jealous of one of those lines ( im not gunna say which) but i think i might have to enter this contest and compete against u superV
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well whether or not you're finished, it's frickin' awesome so far.
i mean i really love it
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Like I always say
You do so very well at this type of thing. Love the descriptions and illusions you've created with this. "Sprinkled reflections" is a jewel. And "harvested souls" really makes me think and wonder. Put a little dark and minor music to this and you'll have something really neat. Add some more and good luck in the contest. This is really neat! Good job ma'am.
GP Paul
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