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heartbeat


the heart beats to the chorus within
at times so loud it drowns out the sounds
then again as a gentle rhythm
scarcely heard, quietly driven
always supporting, rarely leading
the mainstay for love,
living, breathing.
heartbeat.

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  • Stickboy
    November 5
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    awww I love this and I like the shae almost takes the shape of a heart too Thank you for sharing this
    Sean


  • penman gold member
    October 31
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    Wonderful

    A very descriptive and well expressed write. Some very nice reflections in your words. Thank you for sharing