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Misleading Mains Hall

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My outside is a pristine white, a prim and proper house,

I wear it as the maiden wears her chaste, angelic blouse.

But underneath a maiden may not be all that she seems,

The way a metal is not gold, just because it gleams.

I’ve set here snugly on this spot four hundred years or so,

They say a house was here before but I don’t really know.

It matters not, for I’m the one that people talk about,

I’m the Mains Hall shining star, of that there is no doubt.

The Hesketh clan that lived here first was Cath’lic through and through.

The priest hides in the fireplace wall an unmistaken clue

That certain protestants who came were not too welcome here,

Whose treatment of these very priests was crass and cavalier.

So many years ago it ‘twas, the Prince of Wales was wed

To Maria Fitzherbert for a short time it was said.

Enough of these old things I think, let’s move on to today,

For as you enter this staid hall, take heed to what I say.

A fine hotel you think I am, you’re eas’ly fooled by paint.

A peaceful, quiet, restful place is something that I ain’t.

When Lily tops the grand staircase with hollow, glowing eyes

Some guests pack up and quickly leave with trembling goodbyes.

The Cavaliers of Charles the First, the Roundheads of the war,

Gather oft to scare the crowd, along with many more.

Lords and ladies waft about and even children too,

Some ghostly gath’rers in the hall, to highlight just a few.

So see my paint has fooled you all, I’m not quite what I seem.

I’m more at home at midnight ‘midst the moonlight’s eerie gleam.

The ghosts of those that filled my past now fill my rooms and halls,

And if you listen very hard you’ll hear their mournful calls.

Author notes

Always fun to write about houses. Turns out a cousin of a friend of mine was married there. Small world indeed.

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  • Redneck626
    September 21
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    This a beautiful poem about the history of a house..it seems slightly eery.


  • Eric Marsh
    August 31

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    wow

    a great poem, read it several times and had me reminiscing about home in liverpool where there was a haunted house in every street, where we played as kids lol..oh i got the shivers..nice one my mate..thanks for the memories....take care and keep well...eric


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 30

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    I really like this history from the house's prospective.
    I could just see the ghosts planning and scheming!
    you draw in your reader first the start and leave
    them pleased with their read. Well done.
    It is cool that you know of someone who
    had actually had been there!
    Thank you for entering and good luck!

    ~James and Jeannie


  • Ishtar
    August 30

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    You do these things wonderfully, you know - Truly captivates the reader until the last word is written and read.

    I was always a fan of short poetry, with few stanza's that had you thinking for awhile on the meaning and thought, and my father would frown on me and say poetry that tells a tale rather than just convey an emotion are the true "masterpieces." It takes time and effort and great talent to have a precise story threaded together with lovely words, imagery and smooth flow.

    I should have him take a look at all your story like poetry. Teehee. <3

    GD Reens.


  • peluche
    August 28

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    wonderful write

    In the second line there appears to be a typing error, maybe you meant "it" instead of "is," perhaps? In the third stanza, do you mean "lived here"? I love your punctuation on some words, it adds a wonderful rhythm to this poem. The rhyme worked very well and the fact that the whole piece was written from the actual house's point of view added so much more to this. As always, your work is so entertaining and well worth reading!


  • Veronica Leigh
    August 27

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    OMG I LOVE the last line. Made me sorry that it was over! GOOD JOB! I love stuff like this

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