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Dad, Father, No one...


I dont think I can. Take it anymore.
I scream out in anguish and cry
I have to leave my fathers house.

Take everything you gave to over all the years
But I will keep the smiles special and inside
Take my gratuation gift I dont need it anymore
But I will keep all the times you did not make me cry

Take away my brother and posion him with words
But I will keep all the times we played
Take away my scrap book it took 19 years to make
But I  will never forget the way my smile tastes

You have taken everything that I once held dear
You can not take my soul it is always bright
You can not take my love he is by my side
And you can not take away happy because...

Once when I was with you I know you felt it too...

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  • HystericalHeart
    August 27
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    I know this poem is very emotional for you..

    But the poem it's self.. I think could have been better.

    It's okay. I love you! =P