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Pondering True Power

Bend beyond reason
Never twisted laws broken
...But failure awaits.

Can you find true purpose to this?

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  • Pian-Pain
    September 1

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    GOOD

    I like this. Its in Haiku style, so im assuming that it is a Haiku. I like the simplicity of the words, the way their woven brings great meaning to this poem. Though not one of your best works, its still a good poem. See ya tomorrow
    Pian


    • Twisted Reason
      September 2
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      Thanks. Just attempting to get some thoughts out. My new way of doing it easily without consuming much time (thanks for the inspiration). And yes, it is a haiku.