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it's like reaching for breasts









jazz dipped in tequila
wafts like musk

dad hacks up fags 20 years old,
spewing words about
sunspots or something.

his feathers droop.
voluminous
crusty feet scuffle on our porch steps.
matted claws tremble,

and i think i know
whose skin he is remembering













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http://www.asofterworld.com/index.php?id=472

in this case, "fags" means "cigarettes."

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  • Rowan gold member
    August 27
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    I liked this. Very effective.