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Jailed In My Mind

Jailed up in my mind.
All locked away,how unkind.
Hidden from the world and beyond.
Unable to defend.

My thoughts are in a cell.
In their own personal hell.
I cant hear my self scream.
All I  can do is dream.

Scared and all alone.
With no place to call home.
Put away and forgotten.
Disgraced,misplaced,and down trodden.

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  • refinnej
    August 27
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    Flowed very well...made me think i was in a coma ..or living in a realm outside of my body un-albe to speak out. i loved it!!