1.
Roses are red,
violets are blue.
My heart is so empty
and boy, I blame you.
I felt like i was dead,
this much is true.
But your brother he's twenty
and much more attractive than you.
2.
Roses are Red,
Violets are Pink.
Now didn't that answer,
make me need a shrink?
3.
Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue.
This rhyme is askew
as you might've red.
4.
Roses iz Red,
n Violets r Blu
n I can't spell well
I left skool at grade 2.
5.
Roses are Pink
and Violets are Green
and this version of the tale
is rather obsene.
6.
Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue.
Love felt so dead,
until I met you.
Rainbows are bright,
hearts are so pretty
and love is so right
when you make me giddy.
7.
Roses are Red -
I know that it's true
and Violets are Blue
like I am when I'm without you.
Author notes
Meh hahaha.
I'm sorry if it sucks.
A contest entry
- Roses are red.... by Antebellum.
400 points, ended August 28, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Doesn't completely...
'suck'. Most of it v jolly, you should be proud. But I'll warrant that here and there, you thought 'oh that'll just have to do', when you should have gone on to tidy up. I know, because that is what I do.
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sweet but very lasting
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i love this piece
it put a smile on my face
super creative -
Hey I actually really liked this one! Only suggestion I would make is maybe changing the last line to "Like me without you."
Just a suggestion though. Loved it, great work.
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haha. Love the first one.
four is cute :] thanks for entering. -
awww! i really like these, they remind me of an elementary school romance
Very cute! Good luck!
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