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Think, Speak, Believe, Receive

Think of what you want
See it in your mind
Send it to your heart
No dream should be confined

Speak of what you want
Repeat it loud and clear
This, your one desire
Pursue it without fear

Believe with all you have
Your body, mind and soul
Bring it to existence
Your solitary goal

Receive your long sought dream
You now stand face to face
Accept it as faith’s gift
Achieved through loving grace

 

 

 

 

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  • guardianhost gold member
    September 1

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    You know how when you read something and it just seems like it jumps right off the page and stares you straight in the eye? Like it was written just for you??? I felt like this was mine - a message for me!!! This is Gold !!! I really feel it is the most inspirational poem I have ever read. What a Brillant work !!!!!
    I loved this!!!!!
    Seriously!
    Cheryl


    • An Old Codger gold member
      September 1
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      Thanks so much. I was taught to pursue whatever I wanted in this manner. Unfortunately, it's been a hard guide for me to follow. It has to do with being hard headed.

      I'm very glad you enjoyed this.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    August 28

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    A most awesome piece!!!
    Congrats on the gold; much deserved!
    All the best!


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    August 28

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    Your poem is awesome and send a powerful message
    "Think, Speak, Believe, and Recieve"
    These along with hard work makes dreams come true
    A fine spititual write as well

    Congrads on the GOLD
    Very well deserved
    Take care and stay safe
    David


  • Desire gold member
    August 28

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    Thank You!

    Thank You for Your entry: Think, Speak, Believe, Receive
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times ~
    I'm Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for this contest
    I do Hope You Enjoyed the Question and Answer one~
    You took the prompt and brought forth much for the Mind to feast upon~
    Bravo!! When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~
    Woven Strengths: While reading Your words I kept being shown a deck of
    cards as if preparing to play a game of Poker~ I am showing the cards
    turned over to reveal their suit~ Also shown a mirror and a hand reaching
    through this mirror- through the glass~ seeing a Woman staring into this
    mirror- interesting for the reflection is of a Man staring back
    Tight rhyme also
    Strange as it may sound for I am shown like lanterns one has outside
    that soak up the rays of the Sun and then Lights up at night~ solar type
    lanterns Whether Metaphor or literal
    However this to be Interpreted
    Also after reading I am shown a satin type cloth opened and
    inside are Gems revealed~ all different shapes and colors I am shown
    as if they were uncovered from depths of Sacred soil for some reason
    However that is to be Interpreted
    I keep getting the same Images over and over again...
    and reference to February
    Love the direction You took with this prompt
    Hopefully my comment to Your write makes sense
    Powerful verse and message You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    Believe with all you have
    Your body, mind and soul
    Bring it to existence
    Vivid Imagery poured in these lines...

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice
    also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~

    • An Old Codger gold member
      August 28
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      Thanks very much. Your contests always cause a person to think a little deeper. Well, at least I have to think a little deeper.
      This was a pleasure to write for and I thank you greatly for the gold.

      • Desire gold member
        August 28
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        Congratulations and Thank You for taking the time to enter
        for I am Honored Woot~ Keep that quill dancing and Happy
        this was a pleasure~ Yay!!!

  • hend shaheen
    August 27

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    i really like the rhyme!!!!and the lesson the poem express is amazing!!!


  • jamesfox85
    August 27

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    This is also very good, inspiring. think i should maybe do some more upbeat stuff like this one!


  • glenn shannon silver member
    August 26
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    very prophetic and wise here lovely indeed

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