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empty promises.

empty promises.

yellow shirts
and beat up shoes
i sit here, lonely
and sing the blues

tapping at my window
in midst of night
not another
fight, oh fight

i love you too much
to let you go
it's just you
will never know

how much i feel
and what i'd do
to let you know
that I love you

young and dumb
is what they said
over and over
through my head

these things you told,
you said you'd keep
such lies, such bullshit
when alone, i weep

is the glass half full
or is it half empty?
i can't remember
exactly when we

started to fall
at one point, yes
you were my all

but empty promises
broke us
                      apart
you should have been honest
from
              the
start.

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