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The Honeymoon Never Ended






First wedded night -
you spilled cocktail sauce on the white carpet
and eggshell walls of our new house:
an omen for stained beginnings?

The next morning
we drove five hours to the Outer Banks
where everything is old and new and quaint
and lighthouses still reign supreme.

We climbed the spiral stairs at Cape Hatteras -
all 269 of them -
holding hands and giggling at our heaves.
You stopped when I needed to pause

and offered to carry me the rest of the way,
I preferred to climb by myself,
but once we got to the top and I spied
the frigid Atlantic swallowing the horizon,

the sun glinting off the cold, choppy waves,
and the smile in your eyes meant only for me,
I met your wind-chapped lips in a private moment
that left me breathless at 198 feet.

Suddenly I knew you and I were meant to be -
the brutal October wind cheered on,
the waves seemed more vigorous than before,
the ancient sands of barrier islands agreed.





Four years later,
the honeymoon still hasn't ended,

every day is a new adventure,
I still wake up to your tentative kiss and think:

 

if this is a dream, let me sleep forever.


Author notes

For my wonderful husband, John.
Memories of our honeymoon, October 2005 on the North Carolina Outer Banks.

There's a rather funny story behind the red cocktail sauce (well funny looking back):
We had a massive, catered reception with everything you can imagine to eat from chocolate covered strawberries to shrimp.
Our wedding planner packed us a huge basket full of food to take home with us. We were tired, but hungry, when we finally got home.
I tried to tell my new husband not to bring the red sauce into the living room in our new house (where the walls and carpet were pure white - which is stupid anyway), but of course he did.
Murphy's law made sure that he dropped it and it splattered all over the white carpet and halfway across the room and up the white wall. I freaked out because here I was, in my wedding dress, exhausted and wanting to go to bed and he did the ONE thing I asked him not to and I had to clean it up!


We did have a great honeymoon though. I'm a lucky lady to have such a wonderful husband.

THANK YOU, Emmy, for giving me the prompt and opportunity to write this. I was able to say a lot of things I've been meaning to say.

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 31

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    well that was lovely and I remember reading about Cape Hatteres when I was stationed at Ft Bragg

    i love the dreamy ease of your poem here and how romantic love never ends

    Bravo!!!!


  • mgmc gold member
    September 10

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    What a beautiful poem. Very well written. Congratulations on the bronze trophy, very well deserved. Authors notes add to the story. You sound like a very lucky woman!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 7

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    I'm upset this didn't show in my new by favourites list when it was penned
    This is just gorgeous The honeymoon and love expressed is beautiful, honest, fresh and delightful because it is true and real for you and John

    Congratulations on the Bronze darling

    Stay safe
    Love to You
    ~Manda


  • Emmyb gold member
    September 6

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    awwww sooo cute. and sounds like such a romantic time. glad the honeymoon has never stopped since. i am getting married in 2 months and i hope in 4 or 5 years time i still feel as romantic.


  • wave1080
    September 5

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    beautiful

    awww! i love this write of yours , its like i know you guys for long , thanks for sharing and god bless !

  • pkoirish
    September 4

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    Beautifully written

    This is a wonderful piece and a very personal moment that you have shared with us all.. Thank you so much for letting us in to see your happiness....
    PKO
    Four years later,
    the honeymoon still hasn't ended,

    every day is a new adventure,
    I still wake up to your tentative kiss and think:



    if this is a dream, let me sleep forever.

    Forever happiness to you both...


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 2

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    Wow. This is absolutely amazing, sis. You have done a wonderful job on this. I am glad to read of your happiness and am happy for you!
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • DolceVito gold member
    September 1

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    Beautiful, enjoyed the AN as well... Hey, why was I the one who'd always clean up the mess? Nicely done


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    August 31

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    excellent... and i definitely think he is just as lucky to have you as you are to have him


  • sweet arrival gold member
    August 31

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    your love for life and your husband shine through this. such an uplifting write... filled with joy and thanksgiving. and the ending... well, one day... i can only hope WONDERFUL!!!


  • zt
    August 31

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    I liked your observations on the events. My favorite part was the fifth stanza. Lovely! I hope you shared this with John. But, moreso, I hope John appreciated it. Good luck in the contest!


  • awannabepoet
    August 31

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    And love is a thing that can last a lifetime or two in some cases.

    Excellent poem and fun tribute to your hubby a man who is lucky indeed.



  • PastelMoons gold member
    August 29

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    This is so refreshing..
    True and everlasting love.
    It seems rare these days,
    but nontheless appealing.
    You penned your heart
    and the beauty of your love radiates..
    It's nice to read you again
    Thank you for sharing,
    and best wishes in the contest!

    ~Pastel


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    August 29

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    This is such a strong opening line sweetheart. Maybe it's a sign that things will always be colourful and never dull. This made me smile to know you have known such happy moments and still do. It is a beautiful love to watch blossom. Best to you sweetheart


  • HereComesTheSun
    August 27

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    an omen for stained beginnings?
    - this was really brilliant strongly written line :]

    I LOVED the last line
    you did such a great job expressing yourself
    it was just overall amazing.

    wuvved it


  • PerVirtuous
    August 27

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    This fits in the category of things that make you go, "Hmmmmmm. How do I get me an order of that with a side of fries." I smiled a big wide smile and laughed. So cool!!!


  • JinSays gold member
    August 27

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    sigh.
    I really am at a loss here.
    I have no cute comeback really. I just wish you and your husband happiness and joy forever.
    love,
    jin


    • Auburn Sunrise gold member
      August 27
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      aww thanks
      You're reading all my worst work, you know! You should look back a few months ago - I was doing so much better with writing then. LOL


  • Cup-a-Joe
    August 27

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    Here's to fourty four more. I wish you awake like this forever.

    Joe


  • Pure Thought silver member
    August 26

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    Four years and I'm so happy to see this joy coming from you. You have no idea the peace this places in my heart.

    Well written as always.

    BBF, Buddy

  • J Macabre
    August 26

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    This is a wonderfully happy write. I find myself, while drinking this in through my eyes and mind that I'm increasingly jealous. I give you both kudos on your happiness. Wonderfully written for i can feel your bliss through it.

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