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I Bleed

I cut.
I bleed.
You stare in disbelief.
I do this because of you.
You needed to see what you make me do.
The cold steel of the knife.
Just enough pain,not to end life.
You dont understand,you think im crazy.
You dont live my life its foggy and hazy.
Just keep you eyes closed.
And you wont have to watch me bleed.
Once i am over you.
To this need i will say ado.

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  • refinnej
    August 26
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    So emotional!!! I love it!
    "The cold steel of the knife.
    Just enough pain,not to end life."
    It gave me chills and i relate somewhat.