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Alice waking

I gaze into a puddle
Of clear, clean water
And see bright red eyes
Staring at me confused
Beautiful features
Looking like stone
I see black spiky hair
And a tiny face

I can feel everything around me
Smell things I’ve never smelled
See details
Hear for miles

I notice a piece of paper
With one word in curving script
Alice

Author notes

kk so this isnt very good adn i have to fix so things but here it is<3

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