when I heard your plans to kiss me
it's only natural that I assumed
you must have shared the feelings
which I knew I had for you
how wrong I know I truly was
since I know I'm not the only one
because you like to have your plans
and you like to have your fun
a new girl's just another number
for you to add onto your list
which is growing ever longer
naming all the girls you've kissed
and everyone has that friend
but now in my case it's a guy
you may say whore, but I say player
and we all know he doesn't try
relationships are growing rare
and so it hurt me when I fell for you
but now I'm glad it didn't happen
I've caught on to everything you do
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you nailed the prompt right over the head!
Okay okay, beginning:
the first stanza flows very well and does a great job of setting up the tone of the piece;
"a new girl's just another number" is an AWESOME line; that whole stanza is terrific, every line and ever word! i wouldnt be able to say enough about it.
oh watch out for those players
silly jerks
the last stanza is a fantastic summary;
the last two lines blow my mind away.
i love that you put the prompt in the last line, like, "ha! I figured it out before you could do any more damage to me" sort of way; it summarizes and emphasizes the meaning behind this piece.
awesome work! thank you so much for taking the time to enter!!!! :
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