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Devastated Broken Smile

Can be this smile all just a fake moving lips?

Glance of picture,
Caught my sight,
It's not right,

Got no words to say, my lips were shut
Shorter breath, faster heartbeat, numb still
Reality felt like nightmare
I can do nothing
Between death or alive
Going to be endless

Am I still have to smile now?

Author notes

Yeah, a picture in his wallet. Quite killing my feels. Heartbreaking!

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  • Ami
    August 27

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    Wow great write I liked the imaginary in this
    Dark writes are always my favorite
    Thank you so much for entering my contest and Good luck
    -♥Amy♥

  • Got no words to say, my lips were shut
    Shorter breath, faster heartbeat, numb still
    Reality felt like nightmare
    I can do nothing
    Between death or alive
    Going to be endless

    Love this part! Thanks for entering & good luck in the contest!