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A tale of an Erotic Vampire

I feel his cold hands over my body caressing my every inch
I yearn for his next move as he licks my skin
He bends me over exposing my tender flesh
nibbling my back and clenching my breast

My body tingles with anticipation from his breath upon my neck
he thrusts in me as he bites into my flesh
taking me to the point to excasy and beyond
forever shielding our eternal bond

With every breath I am growing weaker as he enjoys my dark embrace
every thrust makes me want to taste
He gently puts me down on the bed and grabs a silver edged blade
runs it up and down my skin then cuts his own chest
the blood it flows to my mouth
filling my every desire

My whole body tingles with energy
as a addiction begins
Blood is now a sweet excasy........................To me

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