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"There Was A Time"

"There was a time"
Words uttered frequently in the dark,
Transporting back to simpler days.
A time for youth, for spacious growth
Now buried like the dead.

"There was a time"
Smiling children racing through the lawn,
Hiding under trees, in bushes.
A time for fun, for silly games
Now ceasing out of fear.

"There was a time"
Subtle glances, giggles, holding hands,
Marks of prepubescent romance.
A time for fun, for harmless love
Now is found in broken hearts.

"There was a time"
Life teemed with grand possibilities
When I remember what used to be.
A time for smiles, for happiness
Now mirages behind tears.

Author notes

A personal reflection on my age
And what being younger meant to me.

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  • Cyclical
    August 28
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    It is 'teemed'. And thank you.


  • Emmyb gold member
    August 28
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    yes, a reflective write. and a mature one.

    is it teemed or teamed?

    Emma


  • OldBear34 silver member
    August 27
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    Truly Mature View

    For one so young, you pack a great deal of understanding into your poem.