I’m so sorry,
can you just please forgive me.
I messed up; this is me doing everything wrong.
What we had was so strong.
I pushed you away, I stopped letting you in,
so you let me be and left me.
Everything feels so cold without you,
though people say I should let you go.
I tell them I have, and that I don’t care,
and that I don’t love you anymore
but when I see you, my feelings come back stronger than ever before.
I will always love you,
if you hear my say that I don’t love you, then that’s a lie.
Because without you I’d rather die.
Can't you open your eyes?
Just to see the hurt and pain I go through,
just to prove my love for you.
Without you I feel emptiness,
because I know you don’t want me anymore.
You took my heart and ripped it to shreds.
It’s so cold now. But you let our relationship die.
And my heart expired the day you said goodbye.
I personally think this is rubbish. What do you think?
Comments
-
well written. love it
-
i really like the title its so attractive!!!but i think that if you switched the words (just)and
(you)in the second line it would sound better...really nice piece full of feelings!!
-
I like this, it's really nice. I can relate to it but you just have to be strong and keep your head up.
Adding your comment:
