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sm...Miss You

 

 

 

the music has no sound

 

with you not around

 

silent is my heart

 

 

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Picture Credit: http://phantomsangel87.deviantart.com/art/Music-for-the-Soul-132802198

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  • rbruce gold member
    September 25
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    I know the feeling. Wonderful poem, beautifully written. Congrats on the trophy.

  • Macsword
    September 14
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    YES!

    Good words poet. In the face of so much competition you did well with these words. Congrats on the HM poet.


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    August 28

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    Love the rhyme!
    You earn many brownie points for that!
    Solid write my fellow poet!
    Good luck!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All

  • Macsword
    August 27
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    Bravo!

    excellent short write to the pic. Good work poet.


  • Griswold gold member
    August 26

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    I like the rhyme. I think so far this is the only one I have seen with it. You did an excellent job with only thirteen words describing the picture prompt. Best of luck to you in the contest... Scott


  • The Drifter
    August 26

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    Short, to the point, a few words that sas it all. Well written. It settles in the heart and cause one to think of when it happened to them. Bitter sweet memories.

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