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Beautiful Magical Moment

Your lips
Touch mine
Now I feel
More than fine
I can't stop myself
I kiss you back
I enjoy it a lot
And that's a fact
A tingly feeling
Spreads though me
I clutch your body
I can see
This is going somewhere
And I say whatever
I want this moment
To last forever
This
Beautiful
Magical
Moment
With
You

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  • Karra-Mayy
    October 8

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    i like this

    as i red it i just kept thinking of my special person tht i love so dearly to my heart

    also while waiting for him to come online. grr!

    this is so sweet and im glad u have someone in your life that you can cherish for your life.

    welcome to the finalist list


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    September 9

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    This is such a sweet poem. I could feel the love for which you wrote this with. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest


  • Sarin Rayne
    September 5

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    This is so sweet abd sensual.I felt the love you put into this wonderful piece of art.You my dear have an amaizing gift and here it shines beautifully.Keep up the work and do not forget,the feeling of love is the grandest gift.


  • Gamefreak
    August 31

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    beautiful

    so little words with so much compassion. these moments are the ones we will hold dear and remember for a life time keep up the good work


  • MoonlitRoses
    August 26
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    This is a really sweet poem. It has a lovely flow, and adorable imagery!
    Great wirte =]

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