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Yet...

...Salinger wept
for youth misspent
upon chords that strove
to lift from below...

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i don't know where this came from, it's four in the morning and this contest seemed interesting.

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  • Nyx Iscariot
    September 3

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    its a good response, to an idea that came out, at 4am.

    nicely done.

    S


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    August 27

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    I am assuming that Salinger is a band or singer of some sort.
    With that assumption, I think this is a very good write!
    Best of luck to you!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All


  • Griswold silver member
    August 26

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    Hmmmmm, Ok, first I don't get the reference to Salinger, so I haven't a clue about the rest of it. Best of luck to you in the contest... Scott