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Connected

 As the song ended,
     I felt you next to me-
everything faded out.

 

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Picture Credit: http://phantomsangel87.deviantart.com/art/Music-for-the-Soul-132802198
13 Words

A contest entry

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  • Griswold silver member
    August 26

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    Very well written, reminds me of a Haiku. You did an excellent job with only thirteen words describing the picture prompt. Best of luck to you in the contest... Scott


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    August 26

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    *sigh
    this has the feeling of love

    Juls


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    August 26

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    Love the last line!
    It ties all the loose ends,
    Leaving no stones unturned.
    Solid write!
    Good luck!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All