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Emotionless [Haiku]

frozen expression
on an emotionless face
- botox overdose

Author notes

T h e R o c k e r W h o L o s t A l l

Contemporary haiku
5-7-5 syllables.

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A contest entry

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  • Macsword
    August 26

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    Congrats ...

    Bringing a smile to this old wrinkled face. Silver well earned poet.


  • xSarahx
    August 26
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    Love it!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 26

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    Congrats on your Silver for this write! I enjoyed reading it. Well done Marisa!




    Jeremy0826

  • xSarahx
    August 26
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    Deep.


  • Rick Weston silver member
    August 26

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    a clever haiku - made me smile, of course depending on when i last received my botox shot, you might not be able to tell. perhaps the title could be something like Static Smile or Stone Face - ha ha.

    well done.

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