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the songbird stilled

by the pebble’s

parabola

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • Mirthryl
    August 27
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    Wonderful imagery!


  • albymyheart gold member
    August 26

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    Succinct, beautiful, peaceful and clever...Alby


  • motel silver member
    August 26

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    I can see it ... thanks.


  • The Slant
    August 26
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    yes.


  • Ariosto II. gold member
    August 26
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    fated
    intersection


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 26

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    thoughts distilled
    by the poets
    inspiration


  • Cannonsfire
    August 26

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    A song caught inside solidness, perhaps the same way a heart captures love or holds the uselessness of it all...you do haiku so well C


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      August 26
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      Thank you. That's because I wait until the imperative moment, the moment when a haiku will not be denied.

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