In the dungeon’s of putrid stench
Lay left over pieces of the dead
And one lonely maiden hangs suspended
Her tattered rags covered with stains of blood
Limp legs and arms sway from side to side
Face obscured in darkness as silence descends
From behind his nostrils breathe in her rotting flesh
Like a perfume of a most addictive drug yet
Hands caress her dirt stained skin, roaming
Fingers plucking at the flesh, kneading
His eyes close in ecstasy as he penetrates
Rotating his hips between her outstretched thighs
Only his cries of ecstasy echo around the murky stones
As this Necropheliac get’s high off this female corpse
Author notes
Wanted to write something disgusting and abhorrent -shrugs-
What did you think
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..really messed up in a beautiful way..? you got a twisted mind and I love it.
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Dead girls don't say no...
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This is disturbing to say the least. I'm a bit taken aback after reading. I had to read it twice, just to make sure I had gotten it right.
awesome write, it's dark and disgusting as you said.
well done,
-Dusty-
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I have never come across this kind of poetry before. I must be a sheltered blighty boy. Interesting. It is very well written and the mood of the dundgeon (and the act) is well captured. I am not disturbed by the subject but the interest in the subject. I will read some more and see what happens. Thanks. Woody
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sisseh as much as i love you, you have a very... twisted mind... have you thought about therapy?!? lol kidding this was really good my darling
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lol! Na I don't need it
. Glad you liked it though, even if you found it disturbing Piccola
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well written, i like the meter and the imagery. But WILL YOU STOP TEASING ME!!
lol
'Face obscured in darkness as silence descends' i like the analogy of silence descending, its a different way of looking at it
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its pretty ^_^ in a sick twisted way lol
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lol!
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