no1 never wanna have me happy...
nothin never sweet like a laughy taffy
people only wanna act sappy, crappy
pass me, love
please don't ditatch me
...
i been wishin that that girl that used to be in my life would just come back
but she's here untapped
her love used to just flow
no foam
it was like a keg of blue moon all my own
she used to make me smile
used to be my friend
thought she'd be here for a while
maybe till the end
i was goin through my trials
with no1 to mend
...
it's okay i guess i'm stronger for it...
but i'd rather be weak with a smile
then strong with a cold stare
claimin that i don't care
cuz the 1 thing that's always rang true
is that the 1 thing i really care about is you...
i wanna give you all of me
you don't really care
but the memory is callin me
the one where i was fallin free
it was love so from truth i was blinded
been on the hunt lookin for a spoof couldn't find it
feelin like a tooth that was grinded
wakin up with pain...
it sucks to need some1
but face it i'm an only child
trapped with all my hurt behind this lonely smile
gotta keep tellin myself
don't redial
cause if she really cared she wouldn't make you suffer
she'd make you supper
kiss, bite and taste your upper
lip
make the love last
take you on a trip
BUT SHE DOESN'T DO IT COMON DUMBIE GET A GRIP!
I wish I didn't need love stuck to my hip...
i'm a sucker...
where's my pacifier?
i'm a baby...
a coward and a liar
that's how i feel all alone
in my room pacin
with no1 to tell me slow down and be patient
tell me that they trust me
and that i'm all they need
push all of my buttons, then push me to succeed
tell me other guys don't got nothin on me
then show me with her actions
till i'm forced to agree
i guess i want that perfect love...
that kind only God can send you down from above
...
the sound of a dove
the scent of a rose
the taste of a berry
the tingle in my toes
the kind that makes you stop carin bout all your foes
...i'm waiting for you baby
come take me from this prose
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Amazing
hey dont have much time to review or w/e. I do love this piece tho.

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excellent write!!
This is really moving. I think everyone wishes to find their true love. I like this poem because it's not about lust, but about finding true love and wanting to hold on for dear life. All I know Lith, is that if you are meant to be together, then nothing, and no one will keep you apart. I liked all your imagery, and the flow was outstanding. Someone will love you Lith because you are a great person. Just remember that. Take care man, and keep up the excellent work!! Hugs,Nbf




