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Presently

There is nothing righteous in me
As far as the I can see
The total tally of my maybe follys secretly tarries from me

I spoke to the future
A past despised or a mask disguised?
I guess its all lies

Theoretically speaking my soul is leaking
From whence then comes this earnest desire
To spread the love spider-webbing across the earthy mire

Please interpret my reality

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  • della vancastle
    August 28
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    I love the first line...and the last. It took a while for me to absorb it all, amazing that so few words can pack such deep meaning.


  • KrazyKazi
    August 27

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    wow.... wonderful wording and description, Pj. the emotion leaks from these words. I hope all is well with you. I missed ya this summer.
    -Cassie