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Not always Lovely

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She yields a lid of color
where her canvas lay dormant,
for the winter, she sings
her mute song, whispering
praise to the bitter sky of twilight -
-black and white-
soul trapped in a bare cascade..




Left of focus
she muses to fly
while her beauty settles
in the empty waves;
crystallizing her deserted shore...



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Prompt : Singing Stones

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  • Mariana gold member
    August 28
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    Nicely penned. Congrats on the shiny.

    Mariana


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    August 27

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    Oh what a beautiful way to describe such. One wonders what they do during their wait... or are the waited on by things we can only imagine?


  • Griswold
    August 26

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    Hmmmm, ok, so this is what far-edged means. Because I just dont get it at all. But that's nothing new as far as Abstract free verse is concerned. Best of luck to you... Scott