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Craving

Tensions thick,
Breathing hard.
His tongue on my
neck, teeth tease my flesh.

My hips trace forever
on his taught treasure.
Sliding slowly
across his bulging jeans.

He whispers,
and I follow.
Door locks behind us.

I surrender to our desire.
From my knees I encircle him.
The moist heat of my lips
threaten to ruin him.

My hands against the cold porcelain.
As he slides deep,
I panic to catch my breath.
His thrusts push me closer.

Thighs shaking,
he grabs my ponytail,
our hips slow, he is drowning in me.

Thunder rolls,

and we    s  h  a  t  t  e  r      in the light.

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  • MichaelLeeSmyth
    September 2

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    Yow! excellent and oh so very hot. I have always said that I like it when people are happy, you are indeed happy.
    Peace


  • Lowell Poe
    August 25

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    ok....ya got a someone stealin ya from me.....sniff...
    papa smurf........
    ok.........sniff.......
    now i know why the long pauses when we speak....
    your talkin to him...........
    great poem...really hot...
    i only wish it was really for me.

    I still love ya with me whole heart...
    nothing can ever change that,
    Liam

  • Lotus Papa
    August 25

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    Was Extraordinary

    I loved when we gushed together. I did all I could to restrain myself in the kitchen. I love you so very much and the time we had together this morning. I love again.