This is pain in its most presentable form
Melting magma maneuvering through words
No rhyming so far maybe the next stanza or two
just keepin' it real, excruciating details all the way through (oops)
The rhyme came early my agony couldn't resist
I guess it's just natural to display emotions like this
My spectacles spectate but choose to negate
Everything they see overwhelmed by the hate..(isn't it great)
This is my flimsy attempt to reinvent my depression
Wish my brain was exempt, but maybe ill learn a lesson
Stop putting myself in these harmful situations, damn it gets lonely
Climbing up this endless mountain trying to escape everybody below me
I don't trust a single soul, so stubborn I isolate my existence
My body would have lost to my mind if it weren't for its persistence
To you this makes no sense, not enough imagery, needs another metaphor
Contents whack, bad format, and I've heard this all before
Fortunately for me this isn't poetry, it's just another outlet
A way to express me and just try to forget about shit
So if your readin' this and don't understand or your having trouble relating
Go back to your fancy computer desk and continue your masterbating !!
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A contest entry
- Life is Pain by mitchybaby.
1000 points, ended August 31, 36 entries
Silver trophy winner
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This is just me blowin off some steam.. if you've read my work, you're probably not surprised. lol If your new... judge me
Comments
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*laughs* I love that ending! It was so funny! Well, great poem! Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest!!!
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"I don't trust a single soul, so stubborn I isolate my existence". "Stop putting myself in these harmful situations, damn it gets lonely"
Sad write, and I feel the anger and pain. I can relate to this very well.
Much love.
~Donna
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HeeHee I loved This
it Made Me LOL!!! x -
Ha! I love this! It's so fun to read and with a nice flow and rhythm too.
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hahahaha I love this piece!! I never thought I could read a dark poem and laugh at the same time. The alliteration was great in this poem, I am a fan of it. Thank you so much for entering
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AMAZING!!!
i love how i can relate to your every write..
the words just blend together and it makes much more since then this bullshit world.. and that last stanza is really funny, i love your poetry so much..
you truely are a great writer..
<3<3<3<3,
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omg!!
this is yet again, another one of my favorites!! dude, i love how you write no matter why you write it!!
"This is my flimsy attempt to reinvent my depression
Wish my brain was exempt, but maybe ill learn a lesson
Stop putting myself in these harmful situations, damn it gets lonely
Climbing up this endless mountain trying to escape everybody below me"
I can so relate and i totally love this stanza!! I love how you use words and put them in an order that flows brilliantly!! awesome job!!!
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