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Going Under

Wake up now,
you are all alone in a
world of endless night.

The air you breathe,
it is suffocating you.
crushing you beneath it's despair.

You scrasmble to inhale,
swallowing only dust.
Choking on antiquity.

Your flowing tears are trailing ashes,
streams of destruction,
evidence of your brokenness.

Wake up,
wake up now,
you are going under.

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  • evershine-90
    September 3

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    Chilling. Great write, tugs at the heart with the iciness of this poem, very dark and painful read indeed! Good job and well written!