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Sweet Sweet lies.

We sit there in the dark.
Feeling the pain of the abuse.

We try to look back on how this happened.
And all we see are sweet lies.

We think further back.
Of how we used to lie.

Only to make people feel worse.
Alone and hurt.

Now we see what lies can do.
The power of them.

A lie is a lie.
By any other name.

It's all the same.
Because all have the same effect.

They destroy people.
They start in the center, the heart.

They work there way out.
Like a disease, spreading.

Soon the person is infected.
They now spread the lies too.

Ahh...
Sweet, sweet lies...

Lies lead to worse things. Please don't hurt people. Don't lie just to hurt feelings...

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  • kareneisenlord gold member
    September 18

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    I love how you called on Shakespeare here - a lie by any other name is just as destructive! Your description of the insidiousness of lying is brilliant. A lie can seem so innocent at first; and you are right - it gets planted as a seed right in the heart ~ and there it roots itself and spreads it's evil and infection. Very good writing... wow!

  • very true sadly, very true.


  • tawk gold member
    August 26

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    Lie's can really hurt and we should never lie. Thanks for sharing your amazing poem with us all. Have a beautiful day my dear friend, hugs Theresa


  • Kappa Pyua
    August 26

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    A very common concept. Many peoples beliefs, hope this will hit home for those who have never thought about it. Thanks for sharing


  • debilynn gold member
    August 25

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    what a profound statement you have made here. it is so true! it is beautiful. thank you for sharing your talents to bring this message forth. keep writing! God bless you always


  • Raven Tears gold member
    August 25

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    Touche!
    Lol's.
    I couldn't agree more.
    What a profound write and you were so true to your words.
    I'm sure many can relate, I know I could.
    Well done!


  • StarEyes
    August 25

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    Wow! powerful read here! So much truth in your words. It sure would be nice if everyone could realize the power of words....... the truth and the lies, and remember that all words touch ones heart one way or another... Great job on this one!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love my friend

    Nyetta


  • that kid
    August 25
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    wow. thats amazing


  • AngelicDreams
    August 25
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    This is beautiful.

  • Wow very beautiful. Very indeed true! Lies hurt and it's like they are killing the will of the person inside. I love this write. You written this beautifully and spoken with the truth.

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