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Shock

I need those things
They use in a crisis
They pull you back to life

If I had telekinesis
I'd yank them back off

Unless they really meant it

Electricity wasted
On an undead corpse
Is a tragedy waiting
In the depths of a loss



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  • Cup-a-Joe
    September 29

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    Oh my what a shocker. Love it cause it's different than your run of the mill.
    You the one.

    Joe

  • jaie2007
    September 9

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    Exciting!!!

    This is something different and hot!!! Your words are very edgy! I dig that.

    "Electricity wasted
    on an undead corpse
    Is a tragedy waiting
    In the depths of a loss"

    I really enjoyed this piece a lot!!!

  • Eusebius
    September 8

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    A good title... slightly arcane poem in that its meaning is somewhat masked? However, a fine write by and most excellent poet!!!