So you want complete honesty,
Well to tell you the truth, I think all gods are imaginary.
Yeah I'm a non believer, it's my decision.
Can you handle my honest opinion,
The world would be a better place,
if everyone threw their bibles away.
And maybe just learn to enjoy the day,
Break the laws, for once do things your way.
Against all gods, Against all government, against all authority,
You can call me a loser, but you can never change me.
I'm just another atheist, that lives for total Anarchy.
That's just how I've always been, how I'll always be.
If you give me a cross to where on my neck,
I'll only where it upside down.
If your only trying to convert me,
then I don't even want you around.
if I was forced into religion well then Satan would be my master
Cause I was born a sinner,I live to for chaos I'm a walking disaster
Who would want a god, who killed his own son?
Sacrificed his own child, his own flesh and blood
You people worship a murder, he's your number one?
Don't hate me cause I don't believe in the fiction you tell,
if anything is true, well then when I die, I hope I burn well.
Don't judge me, it's my decision.
It doesn't matter what you think, it's my opinion .
I am who I am, I do what I want,
Fuck religion.
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D 3 v i l s g i r l Aka Amy114
I may add more to this :]
I may lose a lot of favorites for this write but it's only my opinion
and you wanted honesty
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actually...you're honesty was refreshing....
I don't agree with it...however I do admire
a soul who is honest, bold and raw.
ears/Kathleen/Seattle
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Very Sad
Little Sister I shot meth for nearly 30 years and went to prison 10 times. I was a Slayer Hippy from hell and I used to eat little girls like you for breakfast. It took 40 years for me to finally understand the Truth about God and His love and I will be praying for you to find your way to Christ. He loves you and He laid down His life and died your death so that you could live His life. He loves you and Satan hates you. I know you probably think this is all just a joke or a game but it is not! Forever is not a long time it means that there is no end to it. I promise you that you do not want to burn forever in a devil's hell! I love you little Sister, God bless you. Love James -
I Hate Religion Also
So did my Lord and Savior Jesus. His biggest enemies weren't the sinners, they appreciated Him. The ones that opposed Him vehemently were the Priests, Pharisees and Saducees, the religious elite of His time. In fact they were instrumental in having Him crucified.
When one considers certain words found in the Bible, like 'love', 'trust', and 'believe', one would have to consider that words pertain not to a religion, but a relationship. Even in calling God 'Father' is a term implying relationship. Christianity talks not about religion but a relationship with God.
Not my opinion but better. It's the Truth.
I do respect your statement here and I respond respectfully.
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Good poem. Not sure I exactly agree with the whole screw religion thing. I think what it comes down to is screw spirituality groups that force their views on to you. As a former member of an atheist community, I can say that a group of atheists can be just as immoral. A person doesn't need to follow a religion or believe in a God, but I think it's still important to have self respect and respect other people and the Earth. Good luck in the contest.
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I dunno about F..king religion but I really am not into it either. I believe there is a god and a devil but I don't worship them. I am Wiccan the goddess is my god you could say. lThank you for sharing this it was honest and very angry
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I do respect and admire you for your honesty. I would rather have that than lies, or people telling me what they think I want to hear. I am not here to judge you or condemn you. However, I do have a problem with the title. I don't like profanity, that is my choice. I will gladly keep the poem in, if you are willing to change the word in the title. Can we come to an agreement?
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rem losing my religion ;
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If you put your imagination to good use -Take the word Good and take one o out (that would be the world) and all you would wind up with is GOD. or put another way -take away an o (your soul) and all all that you would have left is....you guessed it kid. He was is and ever will be,but you my misunderstood friend ,
you are but the dot at the end of his sentence. And boy I sure wouldn't wanna be in your shoes. Yes. I Do believe in God but for those reasons that you don't.
{My two cents worth.}
P.S. My favorite qoute in the entire word vocabulary is:
"Forgive them Father, they know not what they do"
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Brutally Honest!
Wow... kinda speechless actually. lol. GREAT poem. Deep and honest piece. Very controversal, which is right up my alley, i simply love it
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Oh Amy, don't you know you're gonna burn in hell for this write lol! This reader thinks you've got balls even though you're a girl. I too for one of my writes, can't remember which now, was told I would burn in hell. All I could say to that was, HA HA HA! Bring it on!. You spoke your mind, copped some flack too, but at the end of the day it doesn't matter. You are you and nobody but you can change that. Great poem but I did notice some errors, ''where'' = ''wear'', ''your'' = ''you're'' and ''murder'' = ''murderer''. Might wanna fix those when you get a chance. Apart from those errors, it had great emotions of hate, rhyming was good and I'd say you done well here. Thanks for sharing and take care.
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LOVE IT. This is perfect, you know how I am about god. Only suggestion:
[If you give me a cross to where on my neck,
I'll only where it upside down. ]
where > wear
Other then that, fucking awesome. This is great, I really enjoyed this. If I was forced into religion, I would go for Satan. Great job.
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What a shame.
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i think youll be safe in this contest so far you have the gold in my eyes inform your frinds so i can close sooooon i reallly do like what you speak i have no religion i hate what our goverment i think they arre boyh hiddeous lies goood luck
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Wow. Being an atheist means that you are religious, because you believe that there is no God nor many. I have mixed religions and it's just....well, confusing. I believe that there is a central God but many gods. Nothing will be forced upon you because no one can tell you what to do.
I like it; short considered to mine, but it's all good.
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Dax
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I like this alot. This reminds me of myself! Good job! I really like the rhythm. -
You're honesty is evident.
I find your opinions shown here to be honest and, although I am a man of faith in God, I have to say I hope you will one day realize that there is a God and that He does love you, in spite of how you might or may not feel about Him. As to your poem; your message is clear, I think the rhyme scheme could be improved upon, and some of you punctuation. But you've said what you think and I, for one, certainly don't judge you. I don't think you can be serious about wanting us all to live in anarchy. It would be like a living hell on earth.
I have one light-hearted question: When atheists orgasm, do the say, "Oh, my Darwin!" ?
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Great title
Dark indeed but great rhythm, great rhyme. Don't forget that if anarchy reigned supreme, where would you live? Where would you be able to buy food? Where would you work?
NOWHERE.
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